A professional looking web site is a very important part of
developing a profitable Internet business. However, your
sales copy is just as important -- each will play a major
role in your success.
The key to writing effective sales copy is simply learning
how to write persuasive words specifically written for your
targeted potential customer. You must feel their needs and
write your copy with passion, excitement and benefits. Tell
them exactly what's in it for them by writing copy that
evokes a specific emotion and stresses your product's
benefits.
Use the following formula when writing your sales copy:
A - Attention - Use a powerful headline that demands
attention
I - Interest - Intrigue interest and create curiosity
D - Detail - Provide details about your product or service
A - Action - Call for action
When you begin writing your copy, your text should be
written in a black, legible font with a light background.
Avoid using fancy fonts or backgrounds that will make your
text difficult to read. Write in small blocks of text with a
space between each block. There is nothing that will make
your visitor click away faster than a sea of black text --so
make sure you use plenty of white space.
A great way to write your copy and come up with new benefits
is to use the "so what" strategy. After each sentence, say
to yourself, "so what" and then elaborate.
Example:
XYZ computers are lightning fast. (so what) They can process
information faster than any other computer on the market.
(so what) Your programs will instantly load on command, (so
what) saving you hours of valuable time and frustration over
the life of your computer.
Remember...benefits sell not features.
Headline
The first and most important part of your sales copy is the
headline. If your headline doesn't instantly capture your
targeted potential customers' attention, and arouse a
specific emotion, the rest of your sales copy will be
useless.
In order to write an effective headline, you must learn how
to use specific words to achieve a specific reaction.
Before writing your headline, you must first learn a little
bit about the basic human motivators. According to
psychologist Abraham Maslow, human behavior is always the
result of one or more of five basic needs. He listed these
needs in a sequence that he refers to as "the hierarchy of
human needs."
He believes that until a less important need is met there
won't be any desire to pursue a more important need. Below
are the five human motivators, beginning with the basic
needs and continuing to the most important needs.
Physiological - Basic human needs include hunger, thirst,
shelter, clothing and sex.
Safety (Security) - Human need for physical, emotional and
financial security.
Social (Affiliation) - Human need for love, affection,
companionship and acceptance.
Esteem (Self Esteem) - Human need for achievement,
recognition, attention and respect.
Self-actualization - Human need to reach their full
potential.
When you are aware of the basic human needs, you can
incorporate these needs into your writing. A great headline
will appeal to your potential customers' emotions. You must
feel their needs, wants and desires and write your headlines
with passion and emotion.
Introduction
Just as your headline is a very important part of your sales
copy, the first paragraph is just as important. Studies have
shown that if your headline attracts your potential
customers' attention, and you can maintain their attention
through the first paragraph, chances are they'll read the
rest of your copy.
The first paragraph should clearly define the benefits that
will be outlined within your sales copy -- identify a
problem and promote your product or service as the solution.
Subheadings
Subheadings are basically just smaller headlines used to
break up your text blocks. They also provide your readers
with important highlights of your paragraphs.
Use plenty of subheadings throughout your copy, as not all
of your visitors will read your copy word for word. They'll
simply scan it and only read what catches their attention.
Remove the Risk
You must provide your potential customers with a solid, no
risk, money back guarantee. In addition, provide a limited
time free trial or download that will completely remove
their risk. This will build your potential customers'
confidence in you and put their mind at ease.
Call for Action
Once your potential customer has read your sales copy, you
must direct them to your order page by asking for the order.
Use a P.S.
When your visitor scans your sales message, chances are
they'll read your headline, sub headlines and your
PostScript message. Place your most important benefits
within your PS message.
Provide Testimonials
Testimonials provide a great way to reassure your visitors.
Blend your testimonials in with your sales message. Avoid
making your visitors have to click to another page to view
your testimonials -- chances are, they won't. By blending
your testimonials in with your sales message, you can ensure
they will be read.
Long Copy verses Short Copy
It is a proven fact that long sales copy out-sells short
sales copy. However, some visitors do prefer a short sales
letter. You can provide your visitors with both. For those
who prefer a short sales letter, provide opportunities to
click through to your order page prior to ending your sales
letter.
Try to keep your sales letter all on one page. Your visitors
would much rather have to scroll through your letter than
click through and load another page. With each additional
click, you'll lose a percentage of your potential customers.
Your words should seamlessly flow together from your
headline through to your order page. Every word, sentence
and headline should have one specific purpose -- to lead
your potential customer to your order page. The simple,
well-designed web sites with killer sales copy make the
sales.
(Continued in part nine)
Copyright © Shelley Lowery 2003.
About the Author:
Shelley Lowery is the author of the highly acclaimed ebook
series, Web Design Mastery -- An eight volume (500+ pages)
in-depth guide to professional web design. Web Design
Mastery is being hailed as the "Bible" for professional web
design.
http://www.webdesignmastery.com
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